Helen the Heartless, true sight to behold.
Helen the Heartless, unicorn of old.
Upon Rainbow Mountain ruling those below,
a bitchy old nag with no heart or no soul.
She pierced other ponies with her horn so sharp,
they cried out in fear at the vicious old harp.
She kicked all their asses from kingdom to come.
When they rose up in masses she even ate some!
Helen the Heartless, true sight to behold.
Helen the Heartless, unicorn of old.
My thanks to JB for editing
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I think it’s great! Exactly what we’re looking for. It’s fun, it’s clever, and it’s well written.
Great work!